Mohawks Rock2024-03-29T10:58:55ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusionhttps://storage.ning.com/topology/rest/1.0/file/get/2660139454?profile=RESIZE_48X48&width=48&height=48&crop=1%3A1https://www.mohawksrock.com/group/createtoliberate/forum/topic/listForContributor?user=3seotljcmsy3o&feed=yes&xn_auth=noSongs, Poems, Verbal, Written And Lyrical Spottag:www.mohawksrock.com,2010-01-03:1501994:Topic:2819152010-01-03T10:49:53.882ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
Meesa figured there was a visual art bit so verbal there should be as well<br />
So please, any ond' everyone feel free tae post yer' poems, songs, rhymes, limricks etc here, and feel just as free to give critique and advice to those who ask it, or those who don't, freedom o speech ye?<br />
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I personally always welcome criticism on mine cause i need tae get better
Meesa figured there was a visual art bit so verbal there should be as well<br />
So please, any ond' everyone feel free tae post yer' poems, songs, rhymes, limricks etc here, and feel just as free to give critique and advice to those who ask it, or those who don't, freedom o speech ye?<br />
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I personally always welcome criticism on mine cause i need tae get better late night crap fiction (forgive shit spelling & grammer)tag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-10-25:1501994:Topic:587792008-10-25T04:51:01.206ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
"I love you." she said.<br />
"I know. I've always known."<br />
They embrased in a sudden desperate kiss, and worked their clothes off furiously, like they were burning their skin.The sex was fast, hard, and unsatisfying. Almost like a ritual to banish something, as quickly as possible. When it was over they did not hold each other.<br />
After a long uncomfortable silence, they dressed, never looking at the other person, and left with no goodbye or acknowledgement. They just simply walked away from each other.…
"I love you." she said.<br />
"I know. I've always known."<br />
They embrased in a sudden desperate kiss, and worked their clothes off furiously, like they were burning their skin.The sex was fast, hard, and unsatisfying. Almost like a ritual to banish something, as quickly as possible. When it was over they did not hold each other.<br />
After a long uncomfortable silence, they dressed, never looking at the other person, and left with no goodbye or acknowledgement. They just simply walked away from each other. And never spoke again.<br />
But they did run in to each other years later, in a store the woman, happily married herding her kids and doing the things that kept her busy and suited to give her life a reason, a purpose.They stopped frozen in time and stared at each other as one who sees a ghost stares. After awhile they both came to thier senses, and made no nod or visible sign to the other, but as if awakened from a sleep jolted back into thier previous activity as though nothing had happened.<br />
The man eventually found his wife and child in the store, and she told him she had seen him staring at the strange woman.<br />
"Did you know her in college or something, honey?"<br />
"I thought I knew her for a little bit," the man replied "but I was wrong."<br />
"Weird, how that older kid kinda looks just like you....." here i amtag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-10-16:1501994:Topic:536022008-10-16T09:12:24.833ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
Here I am in the background again, with acceptance I become the dirt you walk upon,, today I'm so soft,yesterday you rushed to wash me away.. Here I am with my heart, punishing myself for caring,, living in hell, dieing to no longer feel pain,... HHere I am not talking, I am so loud inside yet I am so very sad... you say that you love me, you show that you hate me and you wonder why I cry. Here I am in the darkness now,,,put on my face cover upthe bitch.. Here II am silently screaming, so alive…
Here I am in the background again, with acceptance I become the dirt you walk upon,, today I'm so soft,yesterday you rushed to wash me away.. Here I am with my heart, punishing myself for caring,, living in hell, dieing to no longer feel pain,... HHere I am not talking, I am so loud inside yet I am so very sad... you say that you love me, you show that you hate me and you wonder why I cry. Here I am in the darkness now,,,put on my face cover upthe bitch.. Here II am silently screaming, so alive yet so alone, everyday I'm here so blame me,, "your hell" ,its all my fault,beaten down and critisized, you've discovered I will not talk. Here I am so hurt me, my weakness is my life, standing here wasting water, Your not worth a tear I've shed........ yesterdays trashtag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-10-11:1501994:Topic:501172008-10-11T10:18:39.318ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
little voice lost, irrational fears, obssesive complusive, phobias here, ritalin child ,no one to care, hallucinations vivid dreams ,blank or fixed stare ,manic deppresive ,delerruim now set ,agrresive dellusions ,suicide no regret, cronic fatigue ,narcaleptic and numb, premature death ,peace to come ,chemical contact ,mental confusion, thank mommy for hell, my life her intrusion,,....
little voice lost, irrational fears, obssesive complusive, phobias here, ritalin child ,no one to care, hallucinations vivid dreams ,blank or fixed stare ,manic deppresive ,delerruim now set ,agrresive dellusions ,suicide no regret, cronic fatigue ,narcaleptic and numb, premature death ,peace to come ,chemical contact ,mental confusion, thank mommy for hell, my life her intrusion,,.... Visual Art - Drawing, Photoshop, Abstract, etctag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-09-22:1501994:Topic:434462008-09-22T06:49:20.387ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
A lot of visual stuff coming up so I figured why not open a topic for it!<br />
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Post all your amazing and wonderful works here for others to enjoy.
A lot of visual stuff coming up so I figured why not open a topic for it!<br />
<br />
Post all your amazing and wonderful works here for others to enjoy. Films, short films, video projectstag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-07-18:1501994:Topic:279112008-07-18T08:01:33.446ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
For those of you who are interested in doing video projects.<br />
<br />
First thing I will contribute is a short film somebody contacted one of my sound pages with. It is a 6 or so minute short about some kids surviving in a post world war 3 world. It is tragic in a way but something very beautiful and hopeful in it as well I…
For those of you who are interested in doing video projects.<br />
<br />
First thing I will contribute is a short film somebody contacted one of my sound pages with. It is a 6 or so minute short about some kids surviving in a post world war 3 world. It is tragic in a way but something very beautiful and hopeful in it as well I find.<br />
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<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/poiWym1jaDc&hl=en&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/poiWym1jaDc&hl=en&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="425" height="344" allowscriptaccess="never"></embed><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="never"></param></object> Poetrytag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-07-16:1501994:Topic:276962008-07-16T06:58:35.283ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
Ok, I'll get this discussion started up with a poem I got published long ago. Funny how with everything "green" now it makes a little more sense than it did in '93.<br />
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<b><u><br />
Do the Trees Cry?</u></b><br />
<br />
Do the trees cry<br />
Out to the human race,<br />
To stop our madness<br />
To stop out waste<br />
<br />
For dew gathers<br />
Upon a lone leaf<br />
To fall to the ground<br />
There in grief<br />
<br />
A tear has been shed<br />
A tree has bled<br />
And there on the ground<br />
Another is dead.<br />
<br />
Do the trees cry<br />
As the blade penetrates their skin<br />
Do they let out…
Ok, I'll get this discussion started up with a poem I got published long ago. Funny how with everything "green" now it makes a little more sense than it did in '93.<br />
<br />
<b><u><br />
Do the Trees Cry?</u></b><br />
<br />
Do the trees cry<br />
Out to the human race,<br />
To stop our madness<br />
To stop out waste<br />
<br />
For dew gathers<br />
Upon a lone leaf<br />
To fall to the ground<br />
There in grief<br />
<br />
A tear has been shed<br />
A tree has bled<br />
And there on the ground<br />
Another is dead.<br />
<br />
Do the trees cry<br />
As the blade penetrates their skin<br />
Do they let out the pain<br />
Or retain it within<br />
<br />
Do they look up<br />
Into their killers eyes<br />
To give them forgiveness<br />
With one last breath; before it dies.<br />
<br />
These gentle giants<br />
Have shown us nothing but love<br />
Withstanding the heat<br />
To give us shade from above<br />
<br />
Yet, we take their lives<br />
Like mindless mindless theives<br />
Chop them down<br />
And burn their leaves<br />
<br />
Do the trees cry<br />
Do the trees cry<br />
And if they do<br />
I ask you why<br />
Why do we let them cry.<br />
<br />
--Cheyenne-- Post your music/band/projects here!tag:www.mohawksrock.com,2008-06-23:1501994:Topic:236282008-06-23T05:29:43.788ZCock Sparrerhttps://www.mohawksrock.com/profile/TheGodDelusion
I always love hearing what others are doing so if you are actively writing music of any form, post links for us to check it out.<br />
<br />
For any interested, I will post my many various projects. None of which is anything you would expect a "punk guy" to listen to or create but for those willing to step outside the rules and check out some new stuff, here ya go.<br />
<br />
<a href="http://www.myspace.com/blackblocpe">Black Bloc</a> - anarchist power electronics/harsh noise/anti-music. Largely use no instruments…
I always love hearing what others are doing so if you are actively writing music of any form, post links for us to check it out.<br />
<br />
For any interested, I will post my many various projects. None of which is anything you would expect a "punk guy" to listen to or create but for those willing to step outside the rules and check out some new stuff, here ya go.<br />
<br />
<a href="http://www.myspace.com/blackblocpe">Black Bloc</a> - anarchist power electronics/harsh noise/anti-music. Largely use no instruments save for a keyboard/piano tone loop here and there but instead create walls of distortion and static from grinding metals, captured sounds, effects pedals, and whatever else I find.<br />
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<a href="http://www.myspace.com/deadstreetsatdawn">Dead Streets At Dawn</a> - Evolved out of another project and started out mixing walls of noise with segments of ambient and drone. Starting with the 4th album it went completely ambient/drone/shoegaze and uses no harsh noise walls.<br />
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<a href="http://www.myspace.com/deconstructivescrewdrivercriticism">DeConstructive Screwdriver Criticism</a> - My very first experimental project which spawned the two previously mentioned. Thsi started as just random chaos, evolved to harsh noise, into epic post rock inspired noise/ambient, and now settles at just dark ambient with some white noise/am radio.<br />
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<a href="http://www.myspace.com/romanceintragedyfredonia">Romance In Tragedy</a> - My very first venture into creating music. Neo classical/goth stuff.<br />
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There ya go...now lets hear what you have going on!